(12-11-2014, 04:06 AM)Edda Wrote: ((Er, I wrote more... Christ, I've forgotten how mortifying this could be. Harsh feedback is still the best, please don't let the Garlean set the precedent.))
After taking a moment to think and dwell in self-doubt, Edda began to speak slowly. “…You know of the Rochesters, rights?â€
Another great post. I'm really enjoying the story so far. No harsh feedback to give.Â
But look! I can nitpick for you! I found an extra "s" so you can feel as if your writing isn't already awesome.Â
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-The Garlean