(06-22-2015, 09:48 PM)Hunfrid Wrote: Looks good... But there's one thing I found off.Well, I didn't think of a better place.
Your character was cleaning the house five years after her father died, and found his body... inside the house?
I am not too familiar with Ishgard lore, but that's an aweful long time to be holding on to the corpse of a slave. Inside a house, too.
I guess I took the "skeleton in a closet" saying too literally.
By the way I fixed a few things.