If you're not very confident in your roleplay concepts, maybe take them to Character Workshop and just ask if there's anything you can improve and they'll give you constructive criticism and feedback. We're all pretty nice here.
Also... I'd just put in a short description of the characters you want to RP on. And just tell people what you're looking for really. That's it.
Also... I'd just put in a short description of the characters you want to RP on. And just tell people what you're looking for really. That's it.