(08-22-2015, 05:15 PM)Aiswynd Wrote:(08-22-2015, 05:06 PM)Eses Fafa Wrote: Personally, all of that sounds pretty aceballs, except for that last part. While his comically unfortunate journey seems pretty great, I'm not too sure where along the line he gained the passion for magitek when he was otherwise a rather primitive fellow to start with.
Right that should be explained better, the tribal conflict that occurred was tampered with by Garlean involvement, he blames his death of his tribesmen on the Garlean and their technology being involved in something that had nothing to do with them as far as Aiswynd views things. To understand your enemy...I should explain that better in the backstory thank you for pointing that out.
I have updated the background to better reflect this gap
Aye, no problem! Myeah, that seems alright then!