I like it a lot,Â
Appearance wise he doesn't come across as a traditional magic type, and that is a good thing because traditional is boring to say the least. And you gave him this presence of mystery even through his look it's conveyed because of the part of white hair.
As for the history and things, I find it to be good because his history and personality have enough to know he has a kind heart without knowing why he does have one, it makes a very powerful statement without going into detail and I think it is going to make for good RP. Plus I like the tidbits about his like of books, and scholarly type things. ^^
Appearance wise he doesn't come across as a traditional magic type, and that is a good thing because traditional is boring to say the least. And you gave him this presence of mystery even through his look it's conveyed because of the part of white hair.
As for the history and things, I find it to be good because his history and personality have enough to know he has a kind heart without knowing why he does have one, it makes a very powerful statement without going into detail and I think it is going to make for good RP. Plus I like the tidbits about his like of books, and scholarly type things. ^^