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Full Version: The Final Days of "Ian Carlson" -- On Balmung
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Current story can be found here: https://wiki.ffxiv-roleplayers.com/pages...Carlson.22

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I'd like to know what you think so far. Also a screenshot for the end of chapter one:

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And I'm sorry if people think "Being from another world" is godmodding, but that's your opinion. The above spoiler only has up to the end of Chapter One, I started Chapter two during the end of chapter one, but I didn't chronicle it on the wiki page until I woke up the next morning in the real world, lol.
[Moderator Hardhat]

Moving this thread to Town Square (IC), since it's less General RP discussion and more a story with a request for feedback.

I'll leave a redirect up for a few days.

[/Moderator Hardhat]