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[Feedback!] Miqo'te Kunoichi Backstory - Thunderbolt300 - 12-01-2015 Hey y'all! I'm gonna own up right now in that while I've got maybe a month of play time to my name in FFXIV about 2 years ago, I never really paid much attention to lore. I'm now about a week and 2 days into actually diving into this stuff truly for the first time, I'm only level 42 (I don't mind spoilers), and I'm trying to drink from the firehose, pretty much! What's worse is that unlike some other MMO's with really in-depth wiki articles, I haven't been able to find much for FFXIV- everything has been pretty lean. I've done a few forum searches and I found this thread, which was a REAL help for getting some things straight in my head: http://ffxiv-roleplayers.com/showthread.php?tid=14035 Either way, I just want to make sure I'm not running afoul of any problems in what lore there is, so I'd be really appreciative of any feedback you can give me! Nothing here is really set in stone- I'm pretty open to making adjustments wherever needed to correct problems and smooth the story out. So! On with what I've got so far. Sorry for the wall of text. I still need to make a wiki page, I know! Quote:My Miqo'te is L'anayla Aliaru, a Seeker of the Sun from the Viper tribe. Her history with her tribe abruptly ends when she came of age, being kind of a independent tomboy wild child with a wanderlust streak. She struck off on her own, wanting the freedom that the open road affords her. In essence, she's in self-exile from her tribe, and doesn't intend to return. She adapted to the life of an occasional adventurer and primarily life in the cities of Eorzea. And that's about it. I think I managed to get most of what was going on in my head. Would appreciate any thoughts on this! Thanks! ![]() RE: [Feedback!] Miqo'te Kunoichi Backstory - Thunderbolt300 - 12-03-2015 Well, either this was so utterly terrible nobody wanted to touch it with a ten-foot pole, or as we like to say in information technology, "No news is good news." Talk about extremes! I'd still love a sanity check here either way- feedback and criticism are both very much welcome! Does the lore seem right? Is the concept too "out there?" Or is my understanding of the lore pretty spot-on here? RE: [Feedback!] Miqo'te Kunoichi Backstory - Warren Castille - 12-04-2015 I don't know a whole lot of depth about the ninja lore since I only ran through the 30-50 quests once, but sure why not? There's only one small snag, maybe, that I could think of. The timeline for how things in Doma is, to my unaware mind, not entirely rooted out yet. We know Doma got razed recently, as part of the backlash of the rebellion, but we don't know when that actually started (do we?) If your Master went to Eorzea to hide in the wake of it, your pupils had, at best, a couple of months of training before everything caught up them. Might smooth out a bit better if the master simply retired and left to walk the earth, Kung Fu style, perhaps knowing that there would be turbulence ahead. The Garleans took him out simply because they knew his name and he was a loose end, etcetera. Your story, though. Looks fine to me. RE: [Feedback!] Miqo'te Kunoichi Backstory - Vyce - 12-04-2015 (12-04-2015, 10:00 AM)Warren Castille Wrote: I don't know a whole lot of depth about the ninja lore since I only ran through the 30-50 quests once, but sure why not? There's only one small snag, maybe, that I could think of.What Warren said. The biggest issue in FF14 is that the timeline doesn't equate to real time like, say, GW2. Everything that has happened since 1.0 has happened within the same calendar year, which is 5 years after the calamity (somehow the world has recovered quite a lot, leading me to assume that perhaps Hydaelyn has 48 hour days or something nifty. Basically, in their world, little time has passed. RE: [Feedback!] Miqo'te Kunoichi Backstory - Thunderbolt300 - 12-04-2015 (12-04-2015, 10:04 AM)Vyce Wrote:(12-04-2015, 10:00 AM)Warren Castille Wrote: I don't know a whole lot of depth about the ninja lore since I only ran through the 30-50 quests once, but sure why not? There's only one small snag, maybe, that I could think of.What Warren said. That... actually makes a whole lot of sense to me- I like the idea of playing it safe when it comes to the timeline, considering just how compressed it seems to be. Having their master retire to walk the world sounds like a much smoother idea than the one I had. It's kinda funny that I'm much more used to the GW2 timescale as it stands. This is some awesome stuff. Thanks! |