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Looking for A Home and Friends - Suna Rokuyari - 12-21-2015

All right! Now that I am feeling more comfortable with RPing with folk I am ready for some more in depth Role Play and friends! I have actually met some people from this forum and it has been a real pleasure. (You guys are the best!) All right so, I finally got a story line for Miss Suna ready, her wiki can be found here.


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What I am looking for: Suna is seeking friendship with other adventurers. Being a bit of a newbie to the world outside her temple, she needs a big brother/sister or a mother/father figure to cling too and learn from. Perhaps even a fellow mage to help her hone her skills. Basically just need a family for this lizard.

What I am not looking for:  No romance right now. She's too much of a baby for that.

That's basically it! I am normally on early morning hours, 2-5am Central Time on most nights cause of my work Schedule. I have normal hours on Mondays and Tuesdays. I look forward to meeting your characters in game!

RE: Looking for A Home and Friends - Roe Dad - 12-21-2015

Welcome hope to see you about.

RE: Looking for A Home and Friends - Suna Rokuyari - 12-21-2015

(12-21-2015, 09:21 PM)Lady Krist Wrote: Welcome hope to see you about.
Thank you! I hope too meet you too!

RE: Looking for A Home and Friends - SicketySix - 12-22-2015

Are you open to a bit of critiquing advice?

If so......

It's my understanding that the Auri have only just arrived/have been discovered recently. So that being said, the game then goes into saying that the Kha tribe, has actively sought out other non Auri people. So it's kind of a grey area, but you may have a harder time convincing most people that a Au Ra family has been living in Ul'dah for that long, much less employed at a place as prominent as the Golden Saucer.


Just providing a bit of lore friendly advice is all!
Hope you have fun with the game!

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RE: Looking for A Home and Friends - Suna Rokuyari - 12-22-2015

(12-22-2015, 05:03 AM)SicketySix Wrote: Are you open to a bit of critiquing advice?

If so......

It's my understanding that the Auri have only just arrived/have been discovered recently. So that being said, the game then goes into saying that the Kha tribe, has actively sought out other non Auri people. So it's kind of a grey area, but you may have a harder time convincing most people that a Au Ra family has been living in Ul'dah for that long, much less employed at a place as prominent as the Golden Saucer.


Just providing a bit of lore friendly advice is all!
Hope you have fun with the game!

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Ah! I guess I should have been more clear! I am sorry! No offense taken! I kinda thought they where an oddity living in hiding for the most part. (Except for Papa Rokuyari's employer they kinda stayed in the background.) When she was performing she was just thought to have worn a costume of sorts.  Suna actually hasn't seen any of her kind until recently, which was a happy surprise to her.

I will actually go and amend this in her profile. Thank you!

RE: Looking for A Home and Friends - SicketySix - 12-22-2015

(12-22-2015, 06:56 AM)Suna Rokuyari Wrote:
(12-22-2015, 05:03 AM)SicketySix Wrote: Are you open to a bit of critiquing advice?

If so......

It's my understanding that the Auri have only just arrived/have been discovered recently. So that being said, the game then goes into saying that the Kha tribe, has actively sought out other non Auri people. So it's kind of a grey area, but you may have a harder time convincing most people that a Au Ra family has been living in Ul'dah for that long, much less employed at a place as prominent as the Golden Saucer.


Just providing a bit of lore friendly advice is all!
Hope you have fun with the game!

Thumbsup
Ah! I guess I should have been more clear! I am sorry! No offense taken! I kinda thought they where an oddity living in hiding for the most part. (Except for Papa Rokuyari's employer they kinda stayed in the background.) When she was performing she was just thought to have worn a costume of sorts.  Suna actually hasn't seen any of her kind until recently, which was a happy surprise to her.

I will actually go and amend this in her profile. Thank you!

Ahh yes that makes sense. And infact that's who a lot of people went about introducing their "Oh I was An Au Ra the whole time" stories. Which thanks to the way SE just randomly threw them into the game world, it was really the only way to incorporate them in.

You should have no problem with the way you've written your backstory.

RE: Looking for A Home and Friends - Suna Rokuyari - 12-23-2015

(12-22-2015, 10:33 AM)SicketySix Wrote:
(12-22-2015, 06:56 AM)Suna Rokuyari Wrote:
(12-22-2015, 05:03 AM)SicketySix Wrote: Are you open to a bit of critiquing advice?

If so......

It's my understanding that the Auri have only just arrived/have been discovered recently. So that being said, the game then goes into saying that the Kha tribe, has actively sought out other non Auri people. So it's kind of a grey area, but you may have a harder time convincing most people that a Au Ra family has been living in Ul'dah for that long, much less employed at a place as prominent as the Golden Saucer.


Just providing a bit of lore friendly advice is all!
Hope you have fun with the game!

Thumbsup
Ah! I guess I should have been more clear! I am sorry! No offense taken! I kinda thought they where an oddity living in hiding for the most part. (Except for Papa Rokuyari's employer they kinda stayed in the background.) When she was performing she was just thought to have worn a costume of sorts.  Suna actually hasn't seen any of her kind until recently, which was a happy surprise to her.

I will actually go and amend this in her profile. Thank you!

Ahh yes that makes sense. And infact that's who a lot of people went about introducing their "Oh I was An Au Ra the whole time" stories. Which thanks to the way SE just randomly threw them into the game world, it was really the only way to incorporate them in.

You should have no problem with the way you've written your backstory.

 I thank you so much for your critique It helps me become a better role player!

May I ask you advice sometime as well?

RE: Looking for A Home and Friends - SicketySix - 12-23-2015

(12-23-2015, 07:00 AM)Suna Rokuyari Wrote:
(12-22-2015, 10:33 AM)SicketySix Wrote:
(12-22-2015, 06:56 AM)Suna Rokuyari Wrote:
(12-22-2015, 05:03 AM)SicketySix Wrote: Are you open to a bit of critiquing advice?

If so......

It's my understanding that the Auri have only just arrived/have been discovered recently. So that being said, the game then goes into saying that the Kha tribe, has actively sought out other non Auri people. So it's kind of a grey area, but you may have a harder time convincing most people that a Au Ra family has been living in Ul'dah for that long, much less employed at a place as prominent as the Golden Saucer.


Just providing a bit of lore friendly advice is all!
Hope you have fun with the game!

Thumbsup
Ah! I guess I should have been more clear! I am sorry! No offense taken! I kinda thought they where an oddity living in hiding for the most part. (Except for Papa Rokuyari's employer they kinda stayed in the background.) When she was performing she was just thought to have worn a costume of sorts.  Suna actually hasn't seen any of her kind until recently, which was a happy surprise to her.

I will actually go and amend this in her profile. Thank you!

Ahh yes that makes sense. And infact that's who a lot of people went about introducing their "Oh I was An Au Ra the whole time" stories. Which thanks to the way SE just randomly threw them into the game world, it was really the only way to incorporate them in.

You should have no problem with the way you've written your backstory.

 I thank you so much for your critique It helps me become a better role player!

May I ask you advice sometime as well?

Sure, but I may not be able to help as well as many others here on the forum. I have to seek council myself as well but will be more than happy to help with what I do know, or at least point you to some topics where it's been discussed.