Hello everyone.
I recently posted some poetry to the Lantern and will continue to do so. But I thought I would post a thread here to both get feedback and perhaps some requests for certain pieces.
This is a piece I wrote, originally as a tribute to Limsa Lominsa, but have since expanded it to the entirety of the sea.
I would appreciate any criticisms, questions, comments, or even requests!
I recently posted some poetry to the Lantern and will continue to do so. But I thought I would post a thread here to both get feedback and perhaps some requests for certain pieces.
This is a piece I wrote, originally as a tribute to Limsa Lominsa, but have since expanded it to the entirety of the sea.
I would appreciate any criticisms, questions, comments, or even requests!
Hope gives the earth blessings
Courage lights the flames
Kindness makes water the source of life
Pursuit lets wisdom ride the wind
Burning Passion's Passionate Profile of Burning~!
Courage lights the flames
Kindness makes water the source of life
Pursuit lets wisdom ride the wind
Burning Passion's Passionate Profile of Burning~!
! Love the piece...great job 
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