
OOC Comments:
This was an amazing read. A lovely amount of detail with a hint of vagueness to let the mind wander. Much to your possible dismay, I'm not capable of giving any type of negative criticism. It was well-worded, thought out, and coherent. The story flowed easily and it gave a wonderful peek into Edda's family life and motivations. I can honestly say I want to see more of the social interactions.Â
Definitely looking forwards to any/all continuations.
This was an amazing read. A lovely amount of detail with a hint of vagueness to let the mind wander. Much to your possible dismay, I'm not capable of giving any type of negative criticism. It was well-worded, thought out, and coherent. The story flowed easily and it gave a wonderful peek into Edda's family life and motivations. I can honestly say I want to see more of the social interactions.Â
Definitely looking forwards to any/all continuations.