(12-14-2014, 10:31 AM)Keyblade Wrote: And Aaron isn't a hero, it's just that Ceruleum basically dictates everything he does. It's like a big flaw
Well, that was more in reference to the archetype you were writing.
So you're not working off an established lore precedent...that might make some people discontent. Again, I need to read up on the lore on how ceruleum works to know if this sort of thing is within the realm of potential. My first thought without further reading is that the only society in Eorzea that would have been capable of this sort of tech are the Allagans...which, again, is a red flag for some folks, considering Allagan tech is under very tight lockdown. But then again, there's been plenty of breakouts from Garlemald and Ishgard in terms of characters created, so...
I dunno, someone more versed than me about this will probably provide more valuable opinion than mine. It seems like its reasonable, but only barely just as it's written right now.
