Hello, all! As you've probably surmised from the thread title, I'm looking for some input on my character's backstory. While my primary concern is making sure I didn't botch anything up involving lore, I'm looking for any feedback folks are willing to give. Is something improbable due to conflicting lore? Is something to over-the-top or sappy? Let me know! Given this is being posted on an iPhone, I'm going to provide a link to a Google doc instead of putting the contents in a spoiler field. On a final note, apologies in advance for tense being inconsistent in the draft. It wasn't written with the intent of others seeing it, so it some aspects are sort of sloppy.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hQPn...cslist_api
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hQPn...cslist_api
