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[Critique/Help Wanted] Two Au Ras - Two different styles |
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06-21-2015, 01:11 PM
So in the connections thread I talked about a pirate Au Ra-- I still want to do one, cause I still want to try my hand at EVIL. Though I know in a game like this, its hard. That is understandable.

I actually have plans for 2 Au Ra characters. One is the "Bad Guy" and the other is a bit of a "Druid" (I suppose). Oddly enough, the "Druid/Hunter" to me feels more alive, then the Pirate does and that actually bugs me. Maybe because something about the Pirate route is cliche or something.

Though I am not sure what other evil direction to go in. Could do Ascian servant-- but that is probably a massive red flag of "do not touch". So I'm open for ideas on him (I actually have him generated, not the Druid/Hunter-- I'm gonna try to get him generated later this evening or early tomorrow morning).

Anyways, here is the two and please, please please please, let me know what you guys think. Any suggestions, thoughts, comments, whatever. Thanks!



Katsumi Duskblade - (The Bad Guy)
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Birthday: 26th Sun of the 3rd Astral Moon

Known Job: Pirate & Criminal
Side Profession: Treasure Hunting, Scavenging, Illegal Trade

Information:
Katsumi Duskblade was born in the lands of Othard but for his parents to avoid him being in the servitude of the Garlean Empire any further, they managed to sneak him out to a pirate vessel that was stationed along the coastal borders.

Pleading with the captain, the man took the young boy and made him part of the crew. Katsumi was nothing more for the longest time one of the deckhands and used for the labor of the ship. Treated as an outsider, but eventually took notice during a battle where he actually protected the very captain.

From then Katsumi was given more respect as one of the crewmates and dreamed one day of having his own ship to sail the seas. Being a pirate like the Captain, who learned that even with all the cruelty the lad endured, he always respected him and wanted to be like him. Now though he is on his own and working to become just like that Captain. To also become a name that not only be feared on the seas, but all will come to fear his name in time.



Lukong Drake - (The Hunter/Druid)
Age: 30
Gender: Male
Birthday: 25th day of the Fourth Umbra Moon (8/25)

Known Job: Hunter (Lancer, archer)
Side Profession: Tracker, Scout, Animal Whisper

Information:
Lukong came from a small hunting village, but a heavy storm came and it destroyed everything, including claimed everyone's life -- all but his. He was spared and started to roam alone. This eventually lead him to Eorzea and he made home in the Black Shroud.

He was drawn to the nature and beauty of the forest, including the game he could hunt, but he never did so with proper tribute for any that he would kill. Spoken in a tongue of his ancestors and ancestors before him.

He is quiet and doesn't talk much. Typically is someone who may come across mute and is more apt to display physical expressions than that of words. If he does speak, it is short, sweet, and blunt. He will also sometimes speak in the language of his ancestors in silence to himself, but he never shows a desire to share the knowledge, seeing it as an act offensible to the Dusk father and mother.

He also doesn't smile often and he loves the creatures of the forest. He hates poachers and desires one day to teach people too how to tame creatures, like he does. Including even beasts thought untamable, but that will take time and like with the beasts, along with hunting, he is patient. Very patient.
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[Critique/Help Wanted] Two Au Ras - Two different styles - by Hawkblade - 06-21-2015, 01:11 PM
RE: [Critique/Help Wanted] Two Au Ras - Two different styles - by Nero - 06-21-2015, 04:53 PM
RE: [Critique/Help Wanted] Two Au Ras - Two different styles - by Hawkblade - 06-21-2015, 07:38 PM
RE: [Critique/Help Wanted] Two Au Ras - Two different styles - by Nero - 06-21-2015, 09:14 PM
RE: [Critique/Help Wanted] Two Au Ras - Two different styles - by Hawkblade - 06-21-2015, 09:47 PM
RE: [Critique/Help Wanted] Two Au Ras - Two different styles - by Nero - 06-22-2015, 11:19 AM
RE: [Critique/Help Wanted] Two Au Ras - Two different styles - by Hawkblade - 06-22-2015, 07:16 PM

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