I usually like to keep thing simple, makes RPing easier for me. But I am simple-minded person.
You have pretty many details there, like: stasis, amnesiac, echo, "new eye", time-travel, etc. And it is good thing, but requires lots of self-study about them and how your bring them up in RP. (All those details sounded like story of Warrior of the light in Main story. But it is not important here!). Details requires attention and time.
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But please! Don't be discouraged by my comments, I just wanted to give my opinion and I wish they will help you. Remember, in RP, most important thing is you enjoy it, have fun, do things you like and don't make people's opinions affect your RP. Do your RP as you like! That way RP is really fun and enjoyable!
I would love to offer my help to Ryathan's story in RP. Like Ryathan, Jerciex is veteran Battle of Carteneau. He was working behind the line, evacuating wounded. Maybe This could give them "connection". Maybe Jerciex was one carried Ryathan away from field, and suddenly Bahamuts is there and light.. Then Jerciex notice that Miqo'te he was carrying is gone.
You have pretty many details there, like: stasis, amnesiac, echo, "new eye", time-travel, etc. And it is good thing, but requires lots of self-study about them and how your bring them up in RP. (All those details sounded like story of Warrior of the light in Main story. But it is not important here!). Details requires attention and time.
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But please! Don't be discouraged by my comments, I just wanted to give my opinion and I wish they will help you. Remember, in RP, most important thing is you enjoy it, have fun, do things you like and don't make people's opinions affect your RP. Do your RP as you like! That way RP is really fun and enjoyable!
I would love to offer my help to Ryathan's story in RP. Like Ryathan, Jerciex is veteran Battle of Carteneau. He was working behind the line, evacuating wounded. Maybe This could give them "connection". Maybe Jerciex was one carried Ryathan away from field, and suddenly Bahamuts is there and light.. Then Jerciex notice that Miqo'te he was carrying is gone.
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