I'm not the most well-versed when it comes to Ishgardian skullduggery, but this seems like a solid work up to me. His personality seems to suit his history, and vice versa.
If a small nitpick would help, I think the contents frame follows a different order from the actual article. Not even sure a fix is necessary, really.
If a small nitpick would help, I think the contents frame follows a different order from the actual article. Not even sure a fix is necessary, really.