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08-11-2015, 03:52 AM
https://wiki.ffxiv-roleplayers.com/pages/Kaiz_Kha

I just put up Kaiz's wiki profile, and was hoping people could look it over and see if anything is out of place or contradicts the lore. Stuff like the moving plants was just a guess since I imagine the Steppes to be very slight on plants (moving or otherwise) so it seemed like the sort of thing that would be strange to him. 

It's pretty brief still. I'll add more to it as roleplay inspires me to expand on certain ideas so there isn't a whole ton to look at just yet.

Kaiz Kha: https://wiki.ffxiv-roleplayers.com/pages/Kaiz_Kha
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Critique/proofread requested - by Kaiz - 08-11-2015, 03:52 AM
RE: Critique/proofread requested - by ɴᴘᴄ - 08-11-2015, 02:56 PM
RE: Critique/proofread requested - by Kaiz - 08-11-2015, 03:31 PM

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