It looks really good so far for being a beginner! (I'm also a big Mark Crilley fan <3)
I'd recommend putting less space between the character's eyes. Generally speaking you'll want them to be one eye width apart. You can be a little liberal with that spacing for style (especially if you're doing something like super deformed) but it looks like you're giving this one nearly two eye-widths of space between the eyes, and it's making it look slightly odd.
You might also want to either raise the eyes or lower the nose and mouth for a little more evenness.
The ears you can also be flexible with, but generally speaking you'll want the top of your ears to be roughly level with either the eyebrows or upper eyelid.
Again, great work! I hope to see you practice more, because that's the key to getting better. Practice practice practice.
I'd recommend putting less space between the character's eyes. Generally speaking you'll want them to be one eye width apart. You can be a little liberal with that spacing for style (especially if you're doing something like super deformed) but it looks like you're giving this one nearly two eye-widths of space between the eyes, and it's making it look slightly odd.
You might also want to either raise the eyes or lower the nose and mouth for a little more evenness.
The ears you can also be flexible with, but generally speaking you'll want the top of your ears to be roughly level with either the eyebrows or upper eyelid.
Again, great work! I hope to see you practice more, because that's the key to getting better. Practice practice practice.
