To be perfectly honest, as an FC leader, this post does not inspire me to try to recruit you--in fact, it kinda has the opposite effect, which is why I'm not taking this opportunity to invite you to apply. Most FC's want people who show initiative and are interested in us. We don't want to beg you to join and fight with other groups for your attention so that maybe you will join. Most decent FC's on the server have no shortage of people trying to join, and their leaders are often very busy, so expecting them to go so very far out of their way to recruit you probably won't be productive.
The suspension of disbelief for why a group would, IC, try so very hard to get a certain person to join would already likely have to be stretched, but considering your character is "apparently" a child, suspension of disbelief would be all but broken if an established group was going to try so hard to get a particular pre-teen among their ranks. I'm really not trying to be mean or pick at your post; I just want to give some constructive advice from the perspective of the people you're trying to market yourself to right now. It's not working on us. I recommend a different approach, because I do want to see you in a decent RP FC that you'll enjoy and I'm afraid that won't happen this way. Best of luck to you either way.
The suspension of disbelief for why a group would, IC, try so very hard to get a certain person to join would already likely have to be stretched, but considering your character is "apparently" a child, suspension of disbelief would be all but broken if an established group was going to try so hard to get a particular pre-teen among their ranks. I'm really not trying to be mean or pick at your post; I just want to give some constructive advice from the perspective of the people you're trying to market yourself to right now. It's not working on us. I recommend a different approach, because I do want to see you in a decent RP FC that you'll enjoy and I'm afraid that won't happen this way. Best of luck to you either way.
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