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RE: Another Wiki-Page Constructive Criticism Request |
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12-24-2015, 07:52 AM
(This post was last modified: 12-24-2015, 07:56 AM by Rathalos.)
Ok, I'll just point out a few lore problems.

Try to avoid using "tribe" as a Keeper, tribe is a Seeker method of organisation. Keepers live in families (also called Clans), a number of people that varies, but is much smaller than a tribe. As far as I can remember, women take care of the young and males are often away, stray cats. And although they can be wild, it seems like the Keepers are much more integrated to society in the Shroud instead of being reclusive. Keepers are indeed the hardest kind of Miqo'te to find lore about, but at least this little is there.

The Coeurlclaw are a bunch of females taken by the Coeurl King and kept in a system akin to a cult; the postmoogle quest "The Past is a Story we Never Tell" explains much of how they behave, if you cannot complete it search the transcription of dialogue in the databases. There's only one male there. You're free to use it if you want, but Garlean experiments within the sept are something very unlikely to happen.

Edit: I'm not sure if it's intentional, but your character's mother has a typically male name. Female Keepers have no suffixes in their names!
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Another Wiki-Page Constructive Criticism Request - by Lucius Ignatius - 12-24-2015, 05:39 AM
RE: Another Wiki-Page Constructive Criticism Request - by Virella - 12-24-2015, 07:13 AM
RE: Another Wiki-Page Constructive Criticism Request - by Lucius Ignatius - 12-24-2015, 07:22 AM
RE: Another Wiki-Page Constructive Criticism Request - by Rathalos - 12-24-2015, 07:52 AM
RE: Another Wiki-Page Constructive Criticism Request - by Lucius Ignatius - 12-24-2015, 08:43 AM
RE: Another Wiki-Page Constructive Criticism Request - by Vyce - 12-24-2015, 09:32 AM
RE: Another Wiki-Page Constructive Criticism Request - by Sounsyy - 12-24-2015, 10:39 AM
RE: Another Wiki-Page Constructive Criticism Request - by Lucius Ignatius - 12-24-2015, 11:31 AM

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