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RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. |
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06-01-2016, 09:00 PM
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(06-01-2016, 06:37 PM)Valence Wrote: Also, last thing I think... To avoid any timeline wonky issues or special snowflake stuff since we know that basically most Au'ri have come to Eorzea very recently since the fall of Dhoma... Maybe it would be best if you keep all that DRK initiation... recent actually. I think it might be best if your character is actually just starting to train under the mentor, or looking for another one?
From what Sounsyy described it seems like Xaela being tolerated anywhere near Ishgard is a more recent thing, so contrary to what Virella said, younger might actually be easier to write. A recent immigrant backstory will require less explaining of how she avoided the massacre and perhaps subsequent smaller inquisitorial purges, or even how she managed to make it into the mostly closed off country in the first place. 

That is assuming the character is going to perform their duties there, rather than simply take the skills and teachings of their mentor and apply them to other areas of Eorzea. I think a conflict between Free Paladins and Dark Knights would be very interesting, and it's a shame so much of the quest line is tied heavily into fighting the oppression of the Ishgardian clergy. If you're okay with the character still being a learner and her mentor being an active NPC rather than one from the past, this too could work.

(06-01-2016, 07:40 PM)Warren Castille Wrote: The devil is in the details when it comes to backstories. One man's nuance is another man's distilled-down-to-base-details-from-tvtropes.
Very true. It is why I think it's more useful to simply provide data and help the poster execute a concept that satisfies them, since their tastes and your own cannot necessarily be equated. I think a simple idea and a complex idea have no inherent good or bad qualities outside of how useful they are to the player.

Myself, I wouldn't refuse any of the proposed backgrounds RP if approached. Nothing stands out to me as far fetched at all. IMO what matters most is that all of the elements are important and nothing lacks purpose in the concept.

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Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Zhu - 05-31-2016, 05:30 AM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Valence - 05-31-2016, 07:53 AM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Zhu - 05-31-2016, 10:07 AM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Steel Wolf - 05-31-2016, 10:24 AM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by K'nahli - 05-31-2016, 11:40 AM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Valence - 05-31-2016, 01:00 PM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Zhu - 05-31-2016, 01:44 PM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Virella - 05-31-2016, 01:44 PM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Valence - 05-31-2016, 03:27 PM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Virella - 05-31-2016, 03:45 PM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Valence - 06-01-2016, 03:54 AM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Aaron - 06-01-2016, 08:51 AM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Caspar - 05-31-2016, 04:20 PM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Aaron - 05-31-2016, 04:21 PM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Warren Castille - 06-01-2016, 09:06 AM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Aaron - 06-01-2016, 09:49 AM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Sounsyy - 06-01-2016, 09:54 AM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Valence - 06-01-2016, 10:34 AM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Zhu - 06-01-2016, 04:11 PM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Virella - 06-01-2016, 04:48 PM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Valence - 06-01-2016, 06:37 PM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Caspar - 06-01-2016, 09:00 PM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Sounsyy - 06-01-2016, 06:40 PM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Warren Castille - 06-01-2016, 05:42 PM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Caspar - 06-01-2016, 06:17 PM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Virella - 06-01-2016, 06:57 PM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Sounsyy - 06-01-2016, 07:34 PM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by allgivenover - 06-02-2016, 12:43 PM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Warren Castille - 06-01-2016, 07:40 PM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Gabineaux - 06-02-2016, 01:41 AM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Zhu - 06-02-2016, 06:47 AM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Valence - 06-02-2016, 01:40 PM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Warren Castille - 06-02-2016, 02:02 PM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Sounsyy - 06-02-2016, 03:16 PM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Zhu - 06-02-2016, 08:53 PM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Valence - 06-03-2016, 04:59 AM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by allgivenover - 06-02-2016, 09:10 PM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Zhu - 06-02-2016, 09:13 PM
RE: Brainstorming an Au Ra Dark Knight origin. Need to be lore-checked. - by Caspar - 06-03-2016, 09:17 AM

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