Looks pretty good for the most part.
Few things to note.
The data and classification part of the format is pretty neat and adds to the "data file" type feel of the profile, but I'd avoid rigidly sticking to the terminology and the acronyms for the sake of flexibility. I'd edit it slightly to the following:
It more or less delivers the same information and feel but does not limit you to sticking your guns to terminology or acronyms that other characters/players may not agree with.
As for the titles, it's a little confusing to see them when there is little to no indication as to how she earned them, where she earned them, or who calls her by these numerous titles. It might be best to omit that information from the profile for now. Also, if she's a covert agent highly skilled in infiltration, having a reputation as such might be considered counter-productive.
Those are just nitpicks though, so I really wouldn't worry about them.
Besides that, I don't see any other issues with it, and I do enjoy seeing the SCP-style [REDACTED] appear on a profile.
Few things to note.
The data and classification part of the format is pretty neat and adds to the "data file" type feel of the profile, but I'd avoid rigidly sticking to the terminology and the acronyms for the sake of flexibility. I'd edit it slightly to the following:
Quote:Data File: NR6-3258U
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It more or less delivers the same information and feel but does not limit you to sticking your guns to terminology or acronyms that other characters/players may not agree with.
As for the titles, it's a little confusing to see them when there is little to no indication as to how she earned them, where she earned them, or who calls her by these numerous titles. It might be best to omit that information from the profile for now. Also, if she's a covert agent highly skilled in infiltration, having a reputation as such might be considered counter-productive.
Those are just nitpicks though, so I really wouldn't worry about them.
Besides that, I don't see any other issues with it, and I do enjoy seeing the SCP-style [REDACTED] appear on a profile.
