(06-10-2016, 07:17 PM)Aya Wrote:(06-10-2016, 11:47 AM)Verad Wrote: In the end, they didn't ask any of us how to write this, so what could it be but awful?I wish you had written it Verad
Flattering, but I think you'd still be disappointed by the product. Whatever changes I made to the narrative and to the pacing of the story, I still would have arrived at the same conclusion, resolving the conflict by dismantling the authority of the church and reaching a tentative but genuine peace between Ishgard and the Dravanians. It's a good optimistic ending for the story, but it's a bit of a buzzkill for roleplayers.
Edited to add: Did anybody find Alphinaud's shift in motivation for saving Estinien to be jarring? At the end of 3.2, he seemed resolved to doing so out of principle, rejecting the theses put forth by Matoya et al of sacrifices being necessary in the conflict. That's all well and good, but in 3.3 it seemed more like he was personally invested in saving Estinien like they were good friends, which had never seemed the case to me in 3.0. I don't know about anyone else, but I thought it was a jarring shift.
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