(07-03-2016, 03:22 PM)Reiko Wrote: Now parts of this is under the assumption that the revolt and subsequent sacking of Doma didn't happen overnight, and took a few months, maybe a year. As well as accounting for the time it took to sail over to Eorzea. It's all easily moved if the timing doesn't add up though.
I'd love some feedback, especially on lore bits that I might have misunderstood. I'd like to be accurate, without sacrificing the concept of priestess-turned-engineer. So if there's anything wrong, please let me know!
The rebellion and subsequent razing of Doma may not have happened overnight but it definitely happened in less than a month, more likely a week or two at most. We have a specific timeframe for the start of the Doman revolt, that being the death of the First Emperor of the Garlean Empire, Solus zos Galvus, which began the War of Succession in Garlemald. The Domans believed the Garleans would be distracted enough finding an heir to the throne that they could drive the empire out. Their efforts failed and the city was razed in retaliation.
Yugiri Wrote:For many years, my nation, Doma, suffered under the yoke of imperial rule, and my people yearned to be free. Thus, when a war of succession broke out in Garlemald, we sought to take advantage of the chaos and reclaim our liberty. Alas, our enemy proved less preoccupied than we had hoped, and our rebellion was put down in the most brutal fashion.
Here are some lore links you might find helpful for your character!
-Doma Lore
-Garlean Empire Lore
-Airship Lore (airship info is towards the bottom!)