Heya, and welcome to Balmung!
As a suggestion, what you are trying to roleplay, being blessed by the Twelve, is a very, very touchy subject, as these people claimed to be Avatars of the Gods are extremely rare, if not over the top silly Overpowered (and basically no one knows where these Archons are at the moment). So you /might/ want to drop that.
If you scroll down the first post, you can see why your concept might be a bit of a clashing idea!
Just praising Menphina is cool though !
As a suggestion, what you are trying to roleplay, being blessed by the Twelve, is a very, very touchy subject, as these people claimed to be Avatars of the Gods are extremely rare, if not over the top silly Overpowered (and basically no one knows where these Archons are at the moment). So you /might/ want to drop that.
If you scroll down the first post, you can see why your concept might be a bit of a clashing idea!
Just praising Menphina is cool though !