thank you everyone for the feedback so far. Â This is still a rough work and I'll shore up the rough edges over the next few weeks.
I do like to tell character stories from their own perspective, it helps me sink a bit farther into their character but I think also lets the readers get a taste. Â I'm not 100% that I'm getting her "know it all" attitude in there tho, so like I said, the work will change over the next few days.
I do like to tell character stories from their own perspective, it helps me sink a bit farther into their character but I think also lets the readers get a taste. Â I'm not 100% that I'm getting her "know it all" attitude in there tho, so like I said, the work will change over the next few days.
