(06-29-2017, 08:33 PM)Virella Wrote: Sounds like a base to work of!Very good point!
However, if you go down the Ala Mhigan route, I feel you're either leaving a lot of potential out, or simply didn't include it here? Where did she grow up, what were her parents, what were her parents/caretakers stance on the situation they were forced into? Did she end up living in poverty? Did she get out of it somehow? Did she become bitter towards non-Ala Mhigans or did she get over it all? There's quite a bit of things you can play around with this still!
I suppose she would have been born into poverty before the fall which explains her rather stubborn and attachment to her property. She would have grown up either in a city itself or somewhere rural. Her parents would have been pretty absent in her life from either working or the alternative, dead or just uncaring. Her treatment has left her with a very sour taste of Ul'dah and its natives.
Do you have anymore questions or critiques?
(sorry. not good with xiv lore!)