(07-26-2017, 02:19 PM)Momonija Wrote: Ah, tis a shame we're on different servers >_< Didn't even know moko grass could be smoked though, sounds like a pretty interesting side story idea for me so thank you for that inspiration :D
As for feedback, the backstory looks pretty good. I won't claim to be a lore expert, especially on Lominsa, but it looks like it all checks out. You've got habits and stuff like that down too, which is a good thing to have especially as a beginner o.o Maybe break the chunk of history up into about three paragraphs, makes it easier to read. And correct me if I'm wrong, but doesn't the acting guildmistress for the ACN guild call it "arcanima" instead of "arcanism"? Idk tho
Oh! And you might want to consider an alignment. He's looking a lot like Lawful Neutral atm, owing to his history as a customs officer and sense of loyalty, but it would be good to do some introspection regarding that owob
Good luck with finding people to RP with!
Thank you so much for the info!
I'm still tinkering with the moko grass idea, I've seen a few people talking about it on other threads but I haven't been able to find concrete canon on it yet, and you're so right on the "arcanima" wording thank you for notifying me on that!
I do need to break up the history as that was all just copy/pasted from my iPhone notes and how could I forget alignment! The reply was very much appreciated and thank you for the well wishes! I hope all of your endeavors turn in your favor!
