Hey guys, my character's prologue is now complete and I would love to hear all of your feedback on it. Now remember, all you read there is purely OOC so when the game comes out please do not use any of it as preknown knowledge. I will say that as I planned my character is indeed going to be some sort of 'villain' but how he will do this or what he is trying to achieve is up for interpretation. I know it of course but for those that may not figure it out by the end of the prologue, I don't wanna ruin it.
All comments are welcome and you can make them straight on that post, it's fine by me. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.
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I posted it in the wrong section so I had to repost it. Sorry
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All comments are welcome and you can make them straight on that post, it's fine by me. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.
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I posted it in the wrong section so I had to repost it. Sorry
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