(08-12-2013, 04:21 PM)hypatiala Wrote: BackstoryDid Mommy get a name change?
Hypatia Miro ’s backstory
Hypatia was born as [redacted] on a small farm in La Noscea to a lalafell couple named Mimiro  Miro and Susukuru Nonokuru. Popokiwas a lalafell who hated her ancestry due to a tragic childhood...
I do like the story so far. Leaves a lot of room for discovery. Where in LL does she want to go to learn about the primals? Just the Arcanists' Guild? No need to worry too much about lore here, as there would certainly be several volumes on Primals available. (On a side note, I'd be interested to see how accurate the drawings were!)
Also, Welcome!
There's access to a wiki up top, a useful place for you to pool up more of your thoughts (and come back to when you forget something!). But if you're looking for feedback, you've come to the right place.
I'm in the process of making my first RP character, too! It's challenging, but there isn't as much "you need to change this" feedback as I initially expected, which is always a pleasant surprise.
