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Felix's story, tell me what you think!

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Murlona Murlona Find all posts by this user A most generous hostess Posts:19 Joined:Jul 2013 Character:Murlona Moermoenwyn Server:Hyperion Reputation: 0 RE: Felix's story, tell me what you think! | #5 08-14-2013, 01:41 AM I enjoyed it and was asking myself a couple times "Oh what happened? What happened next?" which I think is part of the mystery you wanted, eh? Your writing is a little choppy sometimes but I think it adds more to an emotional POV feel than to a story feel. Speaking of which.. Felix has great chops. Murlona Moermoenwyn

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Felix's story, tell me what you think! - by Felix Sideris - 08-12-2013, 01:42 PM RE: Felix's story, tell me what you think! - by Felix Sideris - 08-12-2013, 07:31 PM RE: Felix's story, tell me what you think! - by Regulus Heartnet - 08-12-2013, 07:48 PM RE: Felix's story, tell me what you think! - by Felix Sideris - 08-12-2013, 07:50 PM RE: Felix's story, tell me what you think! - by Murlona - 08-14-2013, 01:41 AM RE: Felix's story, tell me what you think! - by Felix Sideris - 08-14-2013, 02:20 AM RE: Felix's story, tell me what you think! - by Kyatai - 08-14-2013, 10:41 AM RE: Felix's story, tell me what you think! - by Felix Sideris - 08-14-2013, 10:50 AM

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