(09-11-2013, 10:30 PM)Knahli Wrote:(09-11-2013, 10:11 PM)Hyunseo Wrote: Her badassery felt reduced to cartoonish half-assery than what I expected her to be like. I mean, I didn't expect her to be a Big Bad, but I did kind of expect her to be a lot more serious??? Or maybe a force to be taken more seriously??
But her sort of unphased attitude is born from her arrogance and feeling of being untouchable, isn't it? The elzen on the other hand who bantered back and forth with her made it a little comical by humouring her attitude due to their past run-ins. He is also cocky, he even insisted on going alone. I don't think he was worried about failing either. He just saw her as a rival and a past mistake that he needed to redeem himself for. I think both him and her had no intentions or worries about losing to one another because they were confident in their own abilities. The mqio'te and your character on the other hand treated it more seriously.
I dunno, maybe its just me but I thought it was a good scene ^^"
I thought it was a good seen with her and the elezen, but even Miss Aliapoh, the other Miqo'te woman who was struggling with fitting in, seemed to be written off without much care.
I suppose everything might have been condensed since it was supposed to be a short story. Perhaps I'm trying to look too much into it when it's supposed to be simple. I was just expecting more, I suppose, for all the characters involved, though I feel like the male elezen was the most well-written compared to the women.
—that's how I can put it. I felt like the main female characters were treated moreso as plot devices rather than developed characters.
EDIT: Don't get me wrong, this is just how I feel. I might just be just wanting more from a little subplot.
I also feel like Keepers aren't getting enough love, because they are a matriarch, and yet I've seen none of that, yet.
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