Hello, y'all,
I am very much new to FFXIV, FF (in general), and role playing.
I just finished up my first character's Wiki page. Is there anyone out there willing to give me feedback, both about the character and about the wiki?
Here's the link:Â Halpask Zwelfsyn
Please, all critique is welcome, as I am trying to improve. I am sure there is a lot to edit.
Additionally, I'll be adding more drawings as I get around to them, and maybe some screenshots, if any are good! That means suggestions for drawings/screenshots are welcome, too. (The unfortunate thing about screenshots is the lack of *~decadent facial hair~* that Halpask has, but alas.)
Thank you!
I am very much new to FFXIV, FF (in general), and role playing.
I just finished up my first character's Wiki page. Is there anyone out there willing to give me feedback, both about the character and about the wiki?
Here's the link:Â Halpask Zwelfsyn
Please, all critique is welcome, as I am trying to improve. I am sure there is a lot to edit.
Additionally, I'll be adding more drawings as I get around to them, and maybe some screenshots, if any are good! That means suggestions for drawings/screenshots are welcome, too. (The unfortunate thing about screenshots is the lack of *~decadent facial hair~* that Halpask has, but alas.)
Thank you!
