Let me preface this with a massive
"My own wiki is still under revamp status due to the nebulous nature of some individuals I had in 1.0 relied on still dragging their feet, I gave them to the end of the year before I simply write them out. So please don't use me as any kind of example, and know that my opinion is one of literally hundreds."
As well as "Your face profile image, /weep so nice, I want better facial hair in game, its lack of choices are why i've gone 'bald.' Oh god art, I always think more art is good. "
On that note, i'd like to start with what I think might be simple technical changes.
-The column width under "general" can be tweaked, its seems fairly small, and since you only have categories it would be safe to widen it without worrying about making a horizontal scroll.
-"complimenting people, uncalled for" under "Likes" looks like it just halted mid statement.
-No Colon after "Hobbies and Talents" but there is one on the other 4
Those are the only casual ones I grabbed at a first read through, now onto ideas for... well not improvement, but just to add things perhaps? As a note, the Wiki is (unless some massive change has been made) considered OOC material, keeping stuff people shouldn't know there by default should be okay and people should respect that. Though I do myself keep a copy in one note with the extra tid-bits I didn't include.
Anywho! I don't think (aside from the swimming trunks shot) there is a single image of your character in their "down time" the chance to see what some one might look like when they think they are alone, or around trusted individuals (if applicable.) helps humanize a character (for me.)
Adding the job level to the classes under "adventurer" I don't think is... necessary? I'm not sure it provides character information thats very useful, if perhaps you meant to show which one he IC had more talent with you could put a "prefers the Lance" or some such, but people (as a note) have a variety of ways of viewing in game stats, (Be it the Lodestone, in game "search info", the lodestone phone app ect.)
Thats about it...
Side question, did you intend to thumbnail your pictures with Gallery? or had you wanted to make it give a zoomable in page view that could be clicked through.
All and all I think it fine, hope I don't offend and provide at least something to think on.
Tah tah for now!
"My own wiki is still under revamp status due to the nebulous nature of some individuals I had in 1.0 relied on still dragging their feet, I gave them to the end of the year before I simply write them out. So please don't use me as any kind of example, and know that my opinion is one of literally hundreds."
As well as "Your face profile image, /weep so nice, I want better facial hair in game, its lack of choices are why i've gone 'bald.' Oh god art, I always think more art is good. "
On that note, i'd like to start with what I think might be simple technical changes.
-The column width under "general" can be tweaked, its seems fairly small, and since you only have categories it would be safe to widen it without worrying about making a horizontal scroll.
-"complimenting people, uncalled for" under "Likes" looks like it just halted mid statement.
-No Colon after "Hobbies and Talents" but there is one on the other 4
Those are the only casual ones I grabbed at a first read through, now onto ideas for... well not improvement, but just to add things perhaps? As a note, the Wiki is (unless some massive change has been made) considered OOC material, keeping stuff people shouldn't know there by default should be okay and people should respect that. Though I do myself keep a copy in one note with the extra tid-bits I didn't include.
Anywho! I don't think (aside from the swimming trunks shot) there is a single image of your character in their "down time" the chance to see what some one might look like when they think they are alone, or around trusted individuals (if applicable.) helps humanize a character (for me.)
Adding the job level to the classes under "adventurer" I don't think is... necessary? I'm not sure it provides character information thats very useful, if perhaps you meant to show which one he IC had more talent with you could put a "prefers the Lance" or some such, but people (as a note) have a variety of ways of viewing in game stats, (Be it the Lodestone, in game "search info", the lodestone phone app ect.)
Thats about it...
Side question, did you intend to thumbnail your pictures with Gallery? or had you wanted to make it give a zoomable in page view that could be clicked through.
All and all I think it fine, hope I don't offend and provide at least something to think on.
Tah tah for now!
