I agree, she seems well grounded in lore. I especially like the bit about her father, it could provide some interesting hooks.
As far as her goals go, though... What you've got is a fair history. You don't really have any explicit motivations for her, though the fact that she's left her tribe to go study suggests that she has some strong ones. I'd ask myself some questions about her, they might help you to find some goals:
As far as her goals go, though... What you've got is a fair history. You don't really have any explicit motivations for her, though the fact that she's left her tribe to go study suggests that she has some strong ones. I'd ask myself some questions about her, they might help you to find some goals:
- She left her tribe. How does she feel about that?
- Who is she close to, now that she's living in Ul'dah?
- How does she feel about men, in light of her revelations of her father?
- How much is she willing to put herself out in order to gain new knowledge?
- What does she do when she's not studying?
