
(06-09-2015, 03:04 PM)Natalie Mcbeef Wrote: "People are annoyed they have to work their way up to new content, instead of just paying money and having it be made available to them."
Inaccurate for some cases.
Try this version:
"Many people are annoyed that they may have to revisit old content, which they have already worked for, in order to access, and begin earnestly working towards, at least some of the new content, which they have paid for."
"But in the laugh there was another voice. A clearer laugh, an ironic laugh. A laugh which laughs because it chooses not to weep."
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