
I like the snippet, but I'd have to hear it in the context of the entire piece to make a real judgment on it.
That said, the snippet doesn't really "grab" me the way the last phase of Titan (Under the Weight) or the opening of Garuda (Fallen Angel) does. Under the Weight especially has that "You thought that was a fight? This just got real" feeling to it.
That said, the snippet doesn't really "grab" me the way the last phase of Titan (Under the Weight) or the opening of Garuda (Fallen Angel) does. Under the Weight especially has that "You thought that was a fight? This just got real" feeling to it.

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