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A Cold Home [Closed][OOC comments welcome]

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Unnamed Mercenary Unnamed Mercenary Find all posts by this user Grumpy Garlean Posts:3,760 Joined:Apr 2014 Linkshell:A Variety Server:Balmung Reputation: 517 Timezone:UTC-8 RE: A Cold Home [Closed][OOC comments welcome] | #4 12-11-2014, 11:41 AM (12-11-2014, 04:06 AM)Edda Wrote: ((Er, I wrote more... Christ, I've forgotten how mortifying this could be. Harsh feedback is still the best, please don't let the Garlean set the precedent.)) After taking a moment to think and dwell in self-doubt, Edda began to speak slowly. “…You know of the Rochesters, rights?” Another great post. I'm really enjoying the story so far. No harsh feedback to give.  But look! I can nitpick for you! I found an extra "s" so you can feel as if your writing isn't already awesome.  <3 -The Garlean Franz'sWiki | Rostnais (WIP)| IC-ish/OOC Tumblr | RPC Chat RPC Staff Team | Staff Contact and Feedback/Requests/Support

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A Cold Home [Closed][OOC comments welcome] - by Edda - 12-08-2014, 08:56 AM RE: A Cold Home [Closed][OOC comments welcome] - by Unnamed Mercenary - 12-08-2014, 02:02 PM RE: A Cold Home [Closed][OOC comments welcome] - by Edda - 12-11-2014, 04:06 AM RE: A Cold Home [Closed][OOC comments welcome] - by Unnamed Mercenary - 12-11-2014, 11:41 AM RE: A Cold Home [Closed][OOC comments welcome] - by Edda - 04-09-2015, 04:32 AM RE: A Cold Home [Closed][OOC comments welcome] - by Edda - 04-13-2015, 08:36 PM

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