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RE: Writing Challenge! (Second) |
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12-24-2014, 11:45 AM
(This post was last modified: 12-24-2014, 11:46 AM by Coatleque.)
Challenge Accepted.
Today we look at what may have happend had Coatleque not kept Spahro's little present before the Starlight Ball...

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The dark-haired and young Miqo'te stood across from the woman in her office with arms folded. The two of them locked eyes, glaring fiercely. She finally took a pad and quill to write down a few notes and handing it back over the desk. "Oh, and one more thing. This is the name and address of an alchemist I know. We don't need any mistakes running around."

"GET OUT!" the woman screamed from across the desk as she snatched the paper from the girl. Spahro Llorn quickly turned and made her escape. Coatleque sat back down with a huff and stared at the note for a minute before pocketing it and going back to her reports. forcefully crumbling it up and dropping it in her waste bin.

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The palace was teeming with activity today. The court just outside the Heart of the Sworn in particular drew its own crowd as the new Captain would be inaugurated today. Family, friends, fellow and former members of the Order stood along the sides of the court. One woman in particular stood out near the steps. Adorned in a long and flowing dress that symbolized her station, her flaming red hair had long since turned to a darker auburn that now gave way to generous amounts of grey.

Her eyes did not leave the young man in uniform who now stood in the center of the court, tall and proud. His jet-black hair only accentuating the same wolfish yellow eyes she knew from a lifetime ago. Though he never new his father, he looked just like the man. The day she had delivered the news was the last she had seen of him herself. And though it was a great pain at the time, she felt a twinge of vindication now at this moment in knowing the man's son had become the complete opposite of him.

She had sacrificed everything for him, including her career, in order to seize Jameson's assets when the man had never returned. A long and arduous battle against the City State to secure her son's future. One that had left a few monetarists reeling in the end. But it was finally agreed that the boy was the soul and rightful heir to the estate and for a few years at least, she could raise him in peace.

A hush fell over the crowd as the now Grandmaster Straightblade addressed those present. It was the usual speech about justice, duty, and honor that was made to every Captain. One she had heard at least three times before now. And while some others in attendance grew bored and perhaps began to nod off, Coatleque only beamed with pride at the man being addressed.

"And so finally, it is with great honor that I name Johnathan Taeros Captain of her Majesty's Sultansworn. Go now, and may you lead with the dignity that befits your name."

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Writing Challenge! (Second) - by Oscare - 07-31-2014, 12:15 PM
RE: Writing Challenge! (First) - by Melodia - 07-31-2014, 12:19 PM
RE: Writing Challenge! (First) - by Warren Castille - 07-31-2014, 12:21 PM
RE: Writing Challenge! (First) - by Unnamed Mercenary - 07-31-2014, 12:25 PM
RE: Writing Challenge! (First) - by Oscare - 07-31-2014, 12:26 PM
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RE: Writing Challenge! (First) - by Berrod Armstrong - 07-31-2014, 12:29 PM
RE: Writing Challenge! (First) - by Oscare - 07-31-2014, 12:32 PM
RE: Writing Challenge! (First) - by Roen - 07-31-2014, 12:43 PM
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RE: Writing Challenge! (First) - by Berrod Armstrong - 07-31-2014, 12:49 PM
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