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01-28-2015, 09:31 PM
It's kinda blunt and distasteful looking but bear with me, I wanna know if it clashes with any lore or such...

She is the youngest daughter of an once very wealthy dunesfolk, owner of many mines around the Eastern Thanalan. She was born with Albiness, so her hair and skin are really bleach white and her eyes red. In the desert enviromnent of Thanalan, this irritated her skin and eyes a lot so she spent a lot of her life sheltered and using full body clothes. She played with her brothers and sisters and some sons and daughters from her father friends. She never really knew her mother, which left them some days before the calamity and after having her, claiming she was tired of the settled life and left, leaving only the starter Thaumatist Staff, which she used as a toy and to pretend she was a mage when she was young, getting chuckles from her 6 brothers and 5 sisters (Really big Family, even though her father was a single kid).

The Calamity whoever, devastated their properties and the life of the patriarch, which died going in and out of the flaming, ruined mansion to make sure they escaped well, and she was only 9 when it happened. Without money or family, the family became refugees since then, which made her treatment even more complicated. Since most of the family knew the ropes, they eventually went their separate ways, and she was cruelly left for dead at 14, claiming life was harsh and they couldn't afford her special treatment and another mouth to feed. Devastasted she just...stayed there, on the desert, holding the Thaumaturge Staff until someone, could be a character here or maybe her mother and didn't recognized her found her. Asked them if they were a Thaumaturge and she said she had no idea. They housed her for a while, gave all the information she needed, fake documents to lie about her age and sent her to Ul'dah to the Thaumaturge Guilds, claiming that in rough time like these, she needed to be strong and make her name. Inspired by the generosity,she went.


She is kinda quiet and distant, since she was quite sheltered, but she is very compassionate, specially since she's so young, and have to keep the facade of an adult, but she has a talent for magic, and an inner rage at her family for doing what they did to her, which just translates into more power for her spells. She avoids being the center of attention, but is generally nice, even if really naive. She also lies a lot, straight faced, and can be kinda greedy, probably down from her family. She is travelling around with the objective of knowing about her mother, furthering her strength to not be weak anymore, and to rebuild the name of their family, even though she is actually not a good merchant due to the fact she CANT handle crowds well.

She also hates Ul'dah, because the sand makes irritates her skin and eyes, and the brightness of the place hurts her eyes, so she avoids staying on the desert too long, and a life-dream is to have a home in Gridania, where there is definetly NO sand, albeit she also went on Mist when she was a girl and loved it.


Any thoughts? I'm camping to a spot on the legacy server since this is where people are going.


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So I need help with this char idea... - by Desu Nee - 01-28-2015, 09:31 PM
RE: So I need help with this char idea... - by Du'lance Fiourtune - 01-28-2015, 09:48 PM
RE: So I need help with this char idea... - by Sounsyy - 01-28-2015, 09:57 PM
RE: So I need help with this char idea... - by Gegenji - 01-29-2015, 11:05 AM
RE: So I need help with this char idea... - by Cliodhna Eoghan - 01-29-2015, 03:46 PM
RE: So I need help with this char idea... - by Gegenji - 01-29-2015, 03:49 PM
RE: So I need help with this char idea... - by Cliodhna Eoghan - 01-29-2015, 04:11 PM
RE: So I need help with this char idea... - by Desu Nee - 01-29-2015, 04:19 PM
RE: So I need help with this char idea... - by Gegenji - 01-29-2015, 04:22 PM
RE: So I need help with this char idea... - by Desu Nee - 01-29-2015, 04:29 PM
RE: So I need help with this char idea... - by Gegenji - 01-29-2015, 04:31 PM
RE: So I need help with this char idea... - by Desu Nee - 01-29-2015, 04:40 PM
RE: So I need help with this char idea... - by Gegenji - 01-29-2015, 04:41 PM
RE: So I need help with this char idea... - by Desu Nee - 01-29-2015, 04:54 PM
RE: So I need help with this char idea... - by Gegenji - 01-29-2015, 04:56 PM
RE: So I need help with this char idea... - by Caspar - 01-30-2015, 12:09 AM
RE: So I need help with this char idea... - by Cliodhna Eoghan - 01-30-2015, 05:02 AM
RE: So I need help with this char idea... - by Caspar - 01-29-2015, 03:50 PM
RE: So I need help with this char idea... - by Faye - 01-29-2015, 12:05 AM
RE: So I need help with this char idea... - by T'shina - 01-29-2015, 12:51 AM
RE: So I need help with this char idea... - by Desu Nee - 01-29-2015, 11:19 AM
RE: So I need help with this char idea... - by Gegenji - 01-29-2015, 03:29 PM
RE: So I need help with this char idea... - by Caspar - 01-29-2015, 03:27 PM
RE: So I need help with this char idea... - by Desu Nee - 01-29-2015, 05:06 PM

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