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I really like the way that this reads. It's an interesting spin on the fresh face look that you were going for, and it fits to lore.
I agree with staying away from the subjective judgements, not that they can't be true, but just make sure that you play her that way so that people will actually think that of her.
I agree with staying away from the subjective judgements, not that they can't be true, but just make sure that you play her that way so that people will actually think that of her.