Do you want some actual critique and instruction in artistic principles? Because I can give plenty, but only if you're totally open and willing to accept your shortcomings. I mean, you really, really need to be sure you can be humble, because I've had experience trying to help people who weren't and it was a waste of everyone's time.
Not that I'm saying your drawing is the worst abomination ever or anything, just that you're missing a lot of fundamentals.
Not that I'm saying your drawing is the worst abomination ever or anything, just that you're missing a lot of fundamentals.