I'm absolutely loving the character back story so far. I was actually a bit disappointed when I realized I reached the end because I wanted to keep reading more!
Just some of my thoughts:
Grammar and punctuation errors aside, it was very well written, at least for my tastes. The only thing I'd personally be a bit cautious about is the event towards the end where Ustarte sees others being teleported away in blue light (I'm assuming this is the same teleportation/light seen when Louisoix casts his spell to send those chosen forward in time and not a regular teleportation to an aetheryte. Of course, correct me if I'm wrong!) The only reason I'd be cautious is due to the fact that it hasn't been stated if only the people at the scene of the battle were sent forward or if others outside of Mor Dhona were sent as well. Judging from what you have written, it looks like it can be adjusted easily if the need ever arises, but I doubt it would be a problem in RP regardless.
Anyways, that's just my thought on it. Welcome to the RPC! I really hope to RP with you in the near future
Oh, and to answer your question, A Realm Reborn does takes place 5 years after the End of an Era event. :approve:
Just some of my thoughts:
Grammar and punctuation errors aside, it was very well written, at least for my tastes. The only thing I'd personally be a bit cautious about is the event towards the end where Ustarte sees others being teleported away in blue light (I'm assuming this is the same teleportation/light seen when Louisoix casts his spell to send those chosen forward in time and not a regular teleportation to an aetheryte. Of course, correct me if I'm wrong!) The only reason I'd be cautious is due to the fact that it hasn't been stated if only the people at the scene of the battle were sent forward or if others outside of Mor Dhona were sent as well. Judging from what you have written, it looks like it can be adjusted easily if the need ever arises, but I doubt it would be a problem in RP regardless.
Anyways, that's just my thought on it. Welcome to the RPC! I really hope to RP with you in the near future
Oh, and to answer your question, A Realm Reborn does takes place 5 years after the End of an Era event. :approve:
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