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(08-11-2015, 02:56 PM)Grandelion Wrote: Well, the word 'condition' appears several times. Perhaps rephrase or reword to avoid repetition. It's very apparent that he's resilient and physically tenacious.Oooh good catch. Right in the first line too. Fixed that, thanks.
Other than that, I don't know much about the lore of the Au Ra, but I wish I did as they are intriguing to say the least.