(09-03-2015, 06:24 PM)Caspar Wrote: I like it. I'm all about themes of duty and responsibility to a cause, and it has the classic feel of a miko's supernatural element in Japanese fiction. Her knowledge of voidsent and hatred of garlemald gives you flexibility to pursue new stories once this plot line concludes.
I thought so as well. It helps prevent me from writing myself into a corner and seems a little less mundane. I'm glad you like it.
