It sounds pretty straightforward and believable enough. This character's edge would probably be best sharpened by how he reacts in the context of once being part of the empire.
1) How does he feel about his life so far?
2) Does he know or care about his origins?
3) Does he actually hate the empire or does he feel indifferent?
4) How does he feel about Eorzea? Does he look down on them?
5) What effect did the empire's propaganda have on him?
Little things like that in conversations will take a character like this a very long way
1) How does he feel about his life so far?
2) Does he know or care about his origins?
3) Does he actually hate the empire or does he feel indifferent?
4) How does he feel about Eorzea? Does he look down on them?
5) What effect did the empire's propaganda have on him?
Little things like that in conversations will take a character like this a very long way
