I've been brainstorming and molding my character over time, and its still a bit in the works so nothing is really set in stone. Ill still be changing over time and figuring him out to make him not lore breaking, but I also don't know lore very well =/. But I wanted some critique or general advice on what I have so far.
Character: Allegro Symphonic ( Alias only, or nickname. As a way to incorporate my IGN)
Age: 23
Race: Mi'qoteÂ
General Class: Astrologian/Dabble in Bard(Not OOCwise, but in characterwise?)
Description/Comments: Allegro is his alias or nickname, his actual name is being formed out to give him lore legitimacy, he is a doman mi'qote who moved to ishgard long ago so he has an odd mixed mutt background. He takes on aspects of both cultures to take onto himself. He tries to hold true to his Doman heritage, but also is fascinated with Ishgardian culture as he took up astrology. He enjoys and loves the stars and fortunes, and excitedly talks about it with friends. He gets self conscious about this though, and often apologizes in the middle of his "rambling". The difficulty comes from his mixture of doman and ishgardian culture, as he was born in Doma, but moved to ishgard years ago with distant relatives. He enjoys using his skills to help others in ishgard and Eorzea as a whole, and studies under sharlayan astrology in order to help heal and help the populace. He knows his teachers are frowned upon for teaching this form of astrology.
Last Comments: Anyway, Im hoping I can receive some critique and advice or anything on this. Or if theres anything that sticks out that bugs anyone.
Character: Allegro Symphonic ( Alias only, or nickname. As a way to incorporate my IGN)
Age: 23
Race: Mi'qoteÂ
General Class: Astrologian/Dabble in Bard(Not OOCwise, but in characterwise?)
Description/Comments: Allegro is his alias or nickname, his actual name is being formed out to give him lore legitimacy, he is a doman mi'qote who moved to ishgard long ago so he has an odd mixed mutt background. He takes on aspects of both cultures to take onto himself. He tries to hold true to his Doman heritage, but also is fascinated with Ishgardian culture as he took up astrology. He enjoys and loves the stars and fortunes, and excitedly talks about it with friends. He gets self conscious about this though, and often apologizes in the middle of his "rambling". The difficulty comes from his mixture of doman and ishgardian culture, as he was born in Doma, but moved to ishgard years ago with distant relatives. He enjoys using his skills to help others in ishgard and Eorzea as a whole, and studies under sharlayan astrology in order to help heal and help the populace. He knows his teachers are frowned upon for teaching this form of astrology.
Last Comments: Anyway, Im hoping I can receive some critique and advice or anything on this. Or if theres anything that sticks out that bugs anyone.
