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RE: Ala Mhigo |
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05-19-2013, 01:37 PM
(This post was last modified: 05-19-2013, 01:42 PM by Aysun.)
I think these two are giving you good guidance already, I just wanted to chime in a bit. There seems to be a LOT going on around your character that pushes the lore to the limits. I'd advise reeling him in a bit for your own sake!

Being Ala Mhigan, if he did not escape during the take over and survived, it is safe to assume he would be one that was brainwashed and turned to work for the Empire. Those who did escape are refugees, and know the fate of many of their fellows that were left behind. In 1.0 storyline, some refugees with the assistance of the Path of the Twelve (adventurers with the Echo) actively try to infiltrate the city to help and are killed.

The Echo--here's another thing. Most RPers avoid giving their character the Echo. It's a messy thing that I would have avoided myself had I known what I know now about it. What I can tell you is that those who have it are considered as bad as the Beastmen/Primals by the Garleans and are, as they said, a huge enemy to the Empire.

Find an element or two in your story that you /really/ want to keep, such as him being born in Ala Mhigo, or his parent's fate/becoming an orphan, or having the Echo, or being raised among Garleans. Reassess how these things fit together (or more importantly, where they DON'T).

Remember, the best part of your character's story won't be his elaborate upbringings; it will be the story you create through RP with others! Smile If you have too much going on already, it casts a shadow over the RP itself!

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Ala Mhigo - by K'tahrl - 05-18-2013, 09:40 AM
RE: Ala Mhigo - by K'tahrl - 05-19-2013, 09:32 AM
RE: Ala Mhigo - by Vareal - 05-19-2013, 10:49 AM
RE: Ala Mhigo - by Yssen - 05-19-2013, 12:34 PM
RE: Ala Mhigo - by Vareal - 05-19-2013, 12:57 PM
RE: Ala Mhigo - by K'tahrl - 05-19-2013, 12:58 PM
RE: Ala Mhigo - by Vareal - 05-19-2013, 01:11 PM
RE: Ala Mhigo - by K'tahrl - 05-19-2013, 01:29 PM
RE: Ala Mhigo - by Uther - 05-19-2013, 01:47 PM
RE: Ala Mhigo - by Aysun - 05-19-2013, 01:37 PM
RE: Ala Mhigo - by K'tahrl - 05-19-2013, 01:47 PM
RE: Ala Mhigo - by Aysun - 05-19-2013, 01:57 PM
RE: Ala Mhigo - by K'tahrl - 05-19-2013, 01:57 PM
RE: Ala Mhigo - by Uther - 05-19-2013, 02:13 PM
RE: Ala Mhigo - by Vareal - 05-19-2013, 02:21 PM
RE: Ala Mhigo - by K'tahrl - 05-19-2013, 02:29 PM
RE: Ala Mhigo - by Uther - 05-19-2013, 02:37 PM
RE: Ala Mhigo - by Rhostel - 05-19-2013, 06:51 PM
RE: Ala Mhigo - by Yssen - 05-20-2013, 01:08 AM
RE: Ala Mhigo - by Rhostel - 05-20-2013, 01:55 AM
RE: Ala Mhigo - by Uther - 05-20-2013, 02:34 AM
RE: Ala Mhigo - by Merri - 05-21-2013, 02:13 PM
RE: Ala Mhigo - by Stormlight - 06-28-2013, 10:55 AM

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