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RE: Working On Character Sheet; Critique Welcome ^_^ |
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06-04-2016, 11:14 PM
Quote:As for the titles, it's a little confusing to see them when there is little to no indication as to how she earned them, where she earned them, or who calls her by these numerous titles. It might be best to omit that information from the profile for now. Also, if she's a covert agent highly skilled in infiltration, having a reputation as such might be considered counter-productive.

Besides that, I don't see any other issues with it, and I do enjoy seeing the SCP-style [REDACTED] appear on a profile.


You definitely have a point with the specific acronym terminology, I was getting a little too gung-ho there I think. XD

As far as the less obvious titles go I was thinking more along the lines that they were titles that they know through research to be referring to her. More of a rumour mill sort of thing than anything official. This doesn't necessarily mean that the general citizenry associates her with these titles.

Given that you were thrown off by them though, I may just make them part of the OOC/Reference section instead of part of the file.

I'm glad you enjoyed the overall style, it's a fun one and makes it necessary to think about what would be known by whoever wrote the file. It also makes it easier to have a more simplified profile when it comes to backstory.

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Working On Character Sheet; Critique Welcome ^_^ - by CausticLullaby - 06-04-2016, 12:41 PM
RE: Working On Character Sheet; Critique Welcome ^_^ - by Sounsyy - 06-04-2016, 08:57 PM
RE: Working On Character Sheet; Critique Welcome ^_^ - by CausticLullaby - 06-04-2016, 10:35 PM
RE: Working On Character Sheet; Critique Welcome ^_^ - by Jana - 06-04-2016, 10:40 PM
RE: Working On Character Sheet; Critique Welcome ^_^ - by CausticLullaby - 06-04-2016, 10:55 PM
RE: Working On Character Sheet; Critique Welcome ^_^ - by Nero - 06-04-2016, 10:52 PM
RE: Working On Character Sheet; Critique Welcome ^_^ - by CausticLullaby - 06-04-2016, 11:14 PM

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