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(12-18-2016, 05:30 PM)RavieRaptor Wrote:(12-18-2016, 05:27 PM)Verad Wrote: What do your average posts look like? Can you give an example?I can, sure.
The door opened slowly with a creak, when a small head poked from it. A small miqo'te with orange-red hair looked around, ears perked up as she noticed the person in the room. She scurried to them, her deep puppy-dog brown eyes looked up at them, flashing a bright fanged grin. "H-Hello there, Sir!"
Okay, good. You're engaging multiple senses, giving a decent visual of the character, and indicating a reasonable amount of personality with a brief stutter. I think perhaps the visual isn't absolutely necessary because we have reasonably decent avatars, but I would engage with this post.
And, in fact, I will. What days and times are good for you, and can you find a reason for this character to brave the Quicksand?
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