(06-23-2013, 06:42 PM)blackdrakon Wrote: This is a very touching story. I like how you deal with your amnesia by adopting the name she had suggested as your own and finishing off by carrying the elder's last name as a tribute to the memories she made for you. Thank you I tryed make a my story fit with what happen in the game and this came to paper then here. Thank you for reading.
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(06-23-2013, 06:59 PM)Kari Illderthane Wrote: I liked it! it had all the feelsIm glad it you in joyed it.
(06-23-2013, 07:13 PM)Scarlet Willow Wrote: Oh no but the endingÂYes i think he will act more human and have hyur culture then miqo'te but time will tell since he as long journey a head of him. I really enjoyed reading your story, I think it makes a great start for a backstory. Out of curiosity, did Vashies pick up some Hyur culture that will stick with him due to Anna's five-year care?
If a mans victory's and riches are measured by the people they step on, then my Victory's are measured by the hands that boosted me over the walls that blocked my path. My riches come from my Knights and my friends no amount of gil can replace them. For this I WILL GROW TO BE THE BEST!
